In the novel the audience sees what autism is really like, no one really knew every thing about autism. When we see what Christopher has to go through having autism. It's not easy, not having many friends, people thinking your weird, people not understanding you and people judging you for who you are. Doing things differently than other people, having to have certain things in certain ways. Some people won't undertand, so they do not think it is normal, but it is for Christopher.
In Romeo and Juliet the audience sees how the mothers life was actually when she was Juliets age. She had an arranged marriage and then got pregnant and had Juliet at age 13. So she didn't know how to raise her. So she had a nurse that helped raise her. We blame the mother for not treating Juliet right and being a bad mother, but it really wasn't her fault. It was not her fault that she had to get married and have a child so young, it was not her choice.
A personal story that I have, this girl was being really rude to me and my best friend. Made one of our guy friends not talk to us anymore, and she was saying really rude stuff about us. Then one day, one of my friends told me about something that happened to her when she was really little. She witnessed her dad beating/killing her mom. So I kind of understood why she was being mean. To go through that is horrible, especially as a young child.
Walking in someone else's shoes can be pretty hard. Especially if you didn't understand it at first and then you go through it, or realize it and then you know how bad it actually was for them. After you go through what they went through or you realize it, it could change your view on yourself and how you should not just he a book by its cover, you have to read into it.
Your Eassay is really reasonable and easy to understand what the topic is all about.
ReplyDeleteYour essay is well written:)I like your concluding paragraph at the end:)
ReplyDeleteI like your essay, but next time double indent each paragraph, also there was a spelling mistake, but I don't blame you for that, because typing a long paragraph on a phone is annoying. Though I liked the conclusion, good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked your essay it's easy to understand. I liked your conclusion a lot, good job:)
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\outl0\strokewidth0 \strokec2 I like how your thesis is clear in your essay! I think you should put more detail into your paragraphs because it kinda seems like you're just answering questions but not really writing an essay
Great start so far! You may want to add a bit more detail to your paragraphs
ReplyDeleteThis is pretty good Kat! Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteYou started off to a good start but I like your conclusion the most !
ReplyDeleteGaby nailed it. Your argument is clear but for you to improve the formal essay portion of the assignment you need quotations and specific evidence/references and a more formal tone. Be careful about sweeping assumptions like "no one really knew…". Try to make statements you can back up with facts. :)
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